The work is so unreal you have to improve the style.
Make shure is that your real talent, maybe the music, the dancing or the poetry are for you. but no the 3d art.

For an old program thumbs up. For this era, thumbs down.

EXTREME 3D!!! that was decades ago... still an 'extremly' good image for such an early 3D program.

By Mei Pham:
I like your art work. It's very nice. Maybe you could work on other stuff!

It is a nice start. Work some more on the texturing and the lighting. There should be a little more ambient light, and something to explain it. Also, the ceiling looks just flat black, like there is nothing up there. It is a good start, though.